Fable of the Mermaid and the Drunks
All those men were there inside,
when she came in totally naked.
They had been drinking: they began to spit.
Newly come from the river, she knew nothing.
She was a mermaid who had lost her way.
The insults flowed down her gleaming flesh.
Obscenities drowned her golden breasts.
Not knowing tears, she did not weep tears.
Not knowing clothes, she did not have clothes.
They blackened her with burnt corks and cigarette stubs,
and rolled around laughing on the tavern floor.
She did not speak because she had no speech.
Her eyes were the colour of distant love,
her twin arms were made of white topaz.
Her lips moved, silent, in a coral light,
and suddenly she went out by that door.
Entering the river she was cleaned,
shining like a white stone in the rain,
and without looking back she swam again
swam towards emptiness, swam towards death.
** Pablo Neruda **
(hey mermaid, i thought you might like this :)
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You know, I guess I could say this is sad, but I'm glad she returned to the river. I wonder what Pablo Neruda intended with the last line. Is her death drowning in sorrow, or is it a release back to a world of what is familiar and loved?
Thanks!
yeah when I read it I felt bad for the mermaid but then you make an interesting point, she is returning to what would be her home. why would he say swam towards emptiness or death though? maybe she was seeking change like humans do when they move to another state and so at that moment as she swims away from the place she had high hopes off, she is feeling empty and the lesson she learns in the end later on is that she was always home and she needed to go through this obstacle to figure it out. (way to much reading into this :)
that reminds me growing up i use to watch this cartoon movie "little mermaid" the original. a few years ago my cousin gave it to me for my bday in hopes that it is the one i use to watch when i was younger. all this talk of mermaids. i'm going to have to watch it this weekend. i hope its the same one. it was a favorite of mine. did you ever see the older version of it?
No, Lorena, I haven't. I only know Disney's version. Who made the old version?
i will have to check once i get home. i can't seem to find it on the internet. i hope its the one from years ago. my friends and i would see it so often. i loved it. will keep you posted.
Hey, I downloaded bird york's album the velvet hour form Itunes. It's pretty good. Have you gotten around to SM's fumbling towards ecstasy??
i did go the same day but it was full price so i'm waiting. now that i have a coupon for it i will probably get it this weekend. i noticed that mirrorball has a great majority that are from that cd and they are some of my favorites so i see what you mean about that being one of her best.
Do you have itunes on your computer? The artists I love, like SM, will get me into the store to buy their CD. O/w, I usually just buy a song for 99 cents, or the album for 9.99. It's great. I'm not sure if mirrorball has the originals. Are they remixes, acoustic versions, or the actual song. I have this thing withy SM remixes. Unless I'm dancing, I want the original, no concert version, no acoustic version (though I like some of them), no remixes! I'm a purist that way:)
no i'm still buying the cd's. i haven't got into buying songs online. i should though.
mirrorball is a live concert cd. its good but i know what you mean about the original being best.
just in case you are reading mermaid. i'm home and looked at my dvd, its the collectible classics "The Little Mermaid" - A production of American film investment produced by Diane Eskenazi. its 49 min long.
Interesting. I never really experienced this before.
experience what exactly? i'm confused?
I think I meant (as my mind does have the tendency to move from one idea to another very quickly, and the typing happens in-between) that at first I thought it was a song, and wished to hear more like it. But also, the neat twist in my imagination of a beautiful thing coming from the sea and the only thing the drunks in the story could do was debase and destroy. The feeling of waste and rudeness as one. I had never really noticed that they are so connected. Not trying to be deep. It just struck me. Good stuff.
Rock On.
oh ok. interesting. thanks for explaining :) it was written by Pablo Neruda.
avinash, thanks for your thoughts on this. very interesting, your take on purity.
also, yeah people are afraid of the unfamiliar and that is probably why the men treated her badly. the same holds true even now. if only people can look at things from the others point of view instead of just selfishly looking at it through there eyes only.
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